Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Show don't Tell

PURPOSE to describe
WALT show not tell in our writing

I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging

·                     Write in the third person
·                     Use capital letters and full stops.

His legs and arms were shaking like a leaf, his sweat was dripping down his chin, he was puffing. He had lots of goosebumps around his body. He was imagining what will happen when they find out…….

Can you tell my emotion I writ about my sentences.

Thursday, 24 July 2014

Five Minute Frenzy

Five Minute Frenzy

WALT. Increase Our Basic Fact Recall  speed.

 It was great to learn Five Minute Frenzy. We have to get to 100 in five minutes and then we have to tick them all to check if the answers are right and each day we have to work harder. I didn't know that I went from 91 to 92.